Tuesday, January 9, 2007

One Deep Breath - Subtle Changes

Sun warms their faces
Healthy glow of rosy cheeks
Sprinkle of freckles

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New stylish hair-do
Condfident, looking pretty
He doesn't notice

~~~

Ivory bishop
Diagonal move to check
Long-standing bet lost

~~~
For more Subtle Changes

6 comments:

Roswila said...

Ivory bishop
Diagonal move to check
Long-standing bet lost

Intriguing!

Jone said...

I love the phrase srinkle of freckles.

Tammy Brierly said...

Our children's changes are so subtle and then we can't remember them all. Touching, as I take in my grandson's every change.

Last two were cute!

Regina said...

I can so relate to the second one!
These were wonderful!

paris parfait said...

Fabulous series of haiku!

S.L. Corsua said...

I've relished reading all three. The second made me chuckle, fondly remembering similar scenes. The third I enjoyed the most (first 'chess' haiku I've read, methinks). ^_^

It's been a pleasure. Cheers.