A place to post my writings when poetry and hums catch me.
Monday, February 12, 2007
One Deep Breath - Shelter
The prompt this week at One Deep Breath is Shelter. Here are two very different takes on the prompt. The first is just fun, the second more of a prayer.
"Because Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things that get you. And all you can do is go where they can find you." Pooh Bear from The House at Pooh Corner by A.A. Milne
10 comments:
A haiku in Proverbs! Magnificent.
The first one made me smile!
And a haiku from the Bible, nicely done.
These were both wonderful- oh, how I can relate to both!
Beautifully done!
Boy, can I relate to the disney poncho being useless as shelter from those florida rain storms - been there, done that many times!
And your second haiku is just beautiful-so comforting :)
How lovely - and a Biblical haiku! Well done.
Very cool to find a proverb haiku!
From Disneyland to Proverbs, lovely haiku. Used those pouches myself
I am taken with both and I love the pooh quote. Peace
Why's the poncho useless?
Yah for Pooh tho.
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