Tuesday, December 18, 2007

A Kind of Beauty

Tarnished winter skies
Polished by white solar rays
Gleaming crystal world


Babe laid in manger
Immanuel, God with us
Long awaited Hope

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susan said...

Especially like your first offering because of the image you create. Thanks for the read.

Crafty Green Poet said...

I particualrly like your use of the word tarnished to describe the winter sky, that may well be the word I've been searching for to describe today's skies here! Thanks!

Sandy Carlson said...

The light cleansing the sky of its tarnish is a wonderful image. Well done. God bless!

get zapped said...

The first one paints winter so well. The second one is very tender.

tumblewords said...

Like Crafty Green - I find the word tarnished to fit the winter sky to a 'T'..

Quiet Paths said...

I too like "tarnished winter skies" and then the juxtaposition of gleaming crystal. A refreshed image for winter! Thank you too for the second.

Greggo said...

the first one is so picturesque, and the second so full of hope. great job!

Honey Mommy said...

Lovely haikus!